by mattchase » Mar Tue 16, 2004 11:31 pm
I think the image itself works very nicely, it is colorful, but has some blank space top and bottom for text. The monochromatic text is ok, but not sure about it being the yellow it is. It is readable, and stands out, but maybe a little too much. I wouldn't go crazy with different colors, but maybe a couple options, such as one color in the sky area and one in the black at the bottom. Or a different color for one line of text that you want to stand out. Also try a different font style (such as italic) on things you want to have stand out or otherwise seperated from the rest the text.
And nope, I can't remember ever having made one.